3. Some people believe that reading stories from e book better than watching TV or playing computer games for children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent decades, there has been a growing trend towards reading e-book stories for children instead of letting them spending time on TV and on computer games. Although these forms of entertainment might have different benefits for children’s development, on the big picture, the e-book offers a myriad of other significant advantages.
There are a number of reasons why e-books benefit children. First of all, in order for parents to provide early education for their children, e-books will act as an incentive for a youngster to explore their childhood. This means that parents are allowed to choose thousands of different stories to read for their child, which assists children’s creativity to be fully developed. Moreover, since e-books are cheap and easy to access, children will be less reliant on other expensive games such as computer games. This means that their parents will be able to save money, which helps families’ finance to be better in the long run.
Watching TV and playing computer games do more harm than good. First, since children are usually spending an hour in front of the TV, they are easy to be addicted. For instance, children might require their parents to allow them watching their favourite TV program during their meals, which becomes a bad habit for children’s development. Secondly, since computer games are updating every day, children need to update the latest version of the games frequently. This means that parents will have to pay a huge amount of money to ensure the enjoyment of their children, which affects seriously saving money of families.
In conclusion, e-books benefit not only children but also families while watching TV and playing computer games have negative impacts on children’s development. Adults should be chosen as the suitable entertainment form for their children carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26689189189 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68753981403 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543918918919 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9495356395 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.357142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293800497973 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122659702146 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799557743935 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205304130887 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256239799601 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.