In most families nowadays, a new concept is developing rapidly in which youngsters stay at home with their father, although a mother has traditionally been looking after their offspring in many countries. The salary and the care for their children are be considered reasons behind this phenomenon and I believe this brings more good than harm to people.
To begin with, the major explanation why a man is staying at home is that he failed to reach a higher position or level in his job. As a result, more and more high-paid occupations are taken by women, and if a wife’s wage is significantly greater than a husband's, it is reasonable for males to remain at home and raise their children. For example, Hillary Clinton was running as a female presidential candidate for a major political party in the U.S, which was one of the first women elected for this position. In addition, with the changes in social beliefs, many fathers take care of their children or cook and play with them better than their wives. For instance, according to the research, children will become more and more intelligent when they play with their fathers from a young age
Besides, in my personal perspective, a father’s commitment to the family is also as important as the mother’s, which can be a significant advantage. First and foremost, raising their offspring and caring for families will be developed in a good direction by the obligation and flexibility of males. Subsequently, several benefits can be seen in this when dads can not only assist their wives with housekeeping but also get along with their youngsters and deal with issues that are too difficult for women to handle. This is the most comfortable and natural method to help young people become more confident in social skills, especially greater independence for cognitive education, and fosters kids’ potential. In Vietnam, for instance, mothers urge their sons to attend academic lessons while fathers encourage them to join a sports club or a judo class.
To summarize, while historically a woman is a person who takes care of the children, in this modern world, there is a new trend when a child is staying home with its father. That is an explanation why I think stay-home-daddy is a positive result through the lower salary and the development of their children.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ary and the care for their children are be considered reasons behind this phenomen...
^^
Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a husband' or simply 'husbands'?
Suggestion: a husband; husbands
...fe’s wage is significantly greater than a husbands, it is reasonable for males to remain a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 448, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...te for a major political party in the U.S, which was one of the first women elect...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93367346939 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82995445766 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545918367347 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3866611629 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.769230769 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1538461538 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378331315883 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145441058249 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521628060156 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260861897904 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390176289178 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ary and the care for their children are be considered reasons behind this phenomen...
^^
Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a husband' or simply 'husbands'?
Suggestion: a husband; husbands
...fe’s wage is significantly greater than a husbands, it is reasonable for males to remain a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 448, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...te for a major political party in the U.S, which was one of the first women elect...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93367346939 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82995445766 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545918367347 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3866611629 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.769230769 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1538461538 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378331315883 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145441058249 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521628060156 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260861897904 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390176289178 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.