7. In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying
To what extent do you agree of disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, we are living in a world where everything around us is digital and computerized. It is often believed by a lot of individuals that moving further the amount of people who prefer newspapers or books will become extinct since they will be provided by online sources with zero cost. In my opinion, I certainly agree with the claim, and in this essay, I will extend my support along with proper conclusion.
To commence with, as a consequence of globalization, technology and knowledge has been shared among the people over the internet. In other words, the innovation of the internet has revolutionized the way we communicate and access crucial data from metropolitan cities to remote areas. As an outcome, with the availability of podcasts and audiobooks, it makes public to choose electronic devices over paper works, as we can acquire updates in faster, smoother and smarter way with zero payment. To illustrate, in recent years, the introduction of digital platforms enabled people to choose e-books and news houses to track the latest news.
Furthermore, in addition to easy accessibility of current affairs, there exists another beneficial factor with regards to pollution control by reducing deforestation. Having said that, switching from paper to electronic can reduce the usage of natural resources such as paper trees. Also, although these are portable, the public should purchase with certain currency and information can be available only in one language. For instance, a recent study reported that more than 30% of the global concern is due to clearance of forests, and in return the planet is experiencing the extreme weather conditions.
To recapitulate, despite the advantages of newspapers such as health conscious and detailed access of the data, to protect the future free from environmental disasters one should adopt the eco-friendly options to avail updates across the globe covering all regions with one tap on the screen. I support this attitude to transcend the phenomenal concerns in this contemporary world
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97372822913 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0188087648 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167389207799 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510883250552 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634627370476 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999375298403 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918368121869 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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