The advances in air travel are focused only in first class and this seems to have left others with no benefits at all. Do you agree or disagree?
In this futuristic era of world travelling by air is quite popular and convenient, so it is chosen by most of people through out world. There are number of air travel agencies working towards fulfilling this goal, such as Air India, Spice-get, Emirates, etc. I partially agree with these sentence that these agencies are more focused towards first class compartments.
First of all, let us discuss about why air travel is more focused on first class. Approximate half of the whole income generated by one flight per trip comes from first class, as in price of one first class ticket there may be two or three economy class tickets or may be more depending upon air travel agencies we can buy. Thus as compared to economy and premium economy class, first class seats required less space on the plane and gives more revenue. In order to motivate people to travel in first class agencies include free and good meals, comfortable seats, more space between seats and good entertainment system in first class compartment. However, all the extra facilities provided in first class depends on price of tickets and air travel agencies.
Now, as we talk about economy class, not all the air travel agencies are only focused on first class such as Air India is not only focused on first class but also gives incredible service to economy class. Their food in economy class is impressive as compare to other air travel agencies. Emirates also gives impressionable services in economy class as compare to their first class. However, due to this COVID-19 pandemic all the air travel agencies were in big loss from last few months, to cope with these losses and to regain their strength some agencies are flying planes with contains only first class personnel.
Overall, air travel agencies should put a little bit of more focus on economy compartment also as they are agency's more amount of customers and should give focus on first class based on price difference between first and economy class.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ular and convenient, so it is chosen by most of people through out world. There are number of ...
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Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...ient, so it is chosen by most of people through out world. There are number of air travel a...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ng upon air travel agencies we can buy. Thus as compared to economy and premium econ...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...erall, air travel agencies should put a little bit of more focus on economy compartment al...
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Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erence between first and economy class.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, thus, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92284866469 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39110963317 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486646884273 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6887285934 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.615384615 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324252427077 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156464639843 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618686890033 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222956960441 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556635944977 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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