Advantages and disadvantages of computers
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As the advancements in technology,computers are reaching wider scope of the human's lives . They are bringing enormous benefits to mankind,but at themeantime,disadvantages as well. Thi essay explores benefits and disadvantages of the computers.
There are a plethora of advanteges which are offered by computers. From the industrial perspective,computers make a great contribution to proliferate output and stoke productivity . For example, they cover up works like performing perplex tasks,modeling stimulated operations or controlling machinery which are people not able to do. In terms of social life, the role of computers is vitally integral . Computers are the core of people's communication ,they changed way we interact and gaining information. Internet ,e-mail and mass media is a quintessence to my statement. By the aid of these technologies ,the spread and speed of the exchanging of information mushroomed to over million times, as a consequence, computers consoled the life of people in terms social life,gaining knowledge ,information and interacting with each other .
However,credibility gap between the above mentioned benefits and results sometimes differentiates immensely. There would be some disadvantages which remain behind the work of computers. For instance, the increasing number of youth are becoming enslaved to this device.
The main factor to this would be that,computer games ,internet facilities are evoking strong inclination of youth, as a result,youngsters are becoming addicted this device from their formative years. Secondly, computers sometimes cause health turmoils,for instance,the most of the scientists concern that those who sit stretch of hours in front of the computer,might live average 29- 35 years. Apart from that ,computers have induced the new field of crimes so-called "cybercrimes" .The web sites like "dark.net" "deepweb" is an epitome example ,because such kind of websites are spurring people to violence and immorality.
The web sites like "dark.net" "deepweb" is an epitome example ,because such kind of websites are spurring people to violence and immorality.
In conclusion , I affirm that there are both merit and demerits of computers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96594427245 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.05824593133 2.80592935109 145% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622291021672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.0001929009 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.055555556 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 44.0 5.01903807615 877% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189147794367 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639407741753 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517764393435 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102209978271 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657155018048 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.05 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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