The advantages and disadvantages of the internet
Nowadays, the internet starts to change the world, and the evidence is the internet more and more popular in daily life, at school, and work, and at home. The internet is very useful so it brings a reliable assistant for people. However; the internet is mixed with blessings and dangers.
We cannot deny that the internet offer to the world numerous beneficial influence. First, the internet is a huge global source of information. In fact, we can find any information on the internet by using the available searching tools like Google, and millions of results appear every time we tap enter on the keyboard. Another positive impact of the internet is that permits people approach education. Absolutely, in the time of the pandemic, online learning is the only safe selection to transfer knowledge to the student, and online learning cannot be in processing without the support of the internet. Finally, the internet connects people in the world together. Through the social network, people can contact, video call, and message each other despite millions of miles apart.
On another hand, the downside of the internet makes people reconsider the way they use the internet. First and foremost, the information on the internet is uncountable, but the percentage of truth is not high. Really, the information on the internet was not be provided by reliable authors, and many anonymous agents try to distort the truth. Another drawback of the internet is the security can be broken. In fact, hackers can steal our private information by the virus, and our privacy is a weapon attack against ourselves. Finally, spending too much time on the internet can make us passive. Apparently, when we depend on the internet, we are more likely to fear interacting with the world outside. For instance, children focus on watching the internet instead of talking to other people, and when they grow up they will feel lonely among the crowd.
As a final observation, we cannot deny that the internet has lots of benefits. However; we also need to know the negative side in order to become smart users who utilize the internet effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...brings a reliable assistant for people. However; the internet is mixed with blessings a...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...that the internet has lots of benefits. However; we also need to know the negative side...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, finally, first, however, if, really, so, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00564971751 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63181040257 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2019900005 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26164359529 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998346398718 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445160575796 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177308295445 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313479660691 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.