With the advent of an online library, public libraries will soon be a thing of the past.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
However,with the arrival of online and local library, some think that public libraries will become an item of the past.I disagree with this view and the reasons will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, some individuals argue that online library would take over public library due to the advancement and proliferation of digital technology.they believe that with the use of mobile phones, laptops and data connection and at the tap of one's finger tips ,an individual could access the internet and browse as much information as needed .
Advocate of this group believe that unlike the local libaries,the online libraries could be accessed in the comfort of their home, regardless of the time of and day.
On the other hand,there are compelling reasons why I do believe that local library offers a top-notch service and will still remain useful. Firstly, information and materials gotten from the public library are hundred percent extremely reliable and accurate, thus they have been properly researched on and backed up with plenty evidence .In addition, public libraries contain old manuscripts, historical books and modern fictions that contain varieties of language which is good place for scholars to access and get concrete information.
Secondly ,the public library is situated in an atmosphere that is conducive to study,with less noise. individuals can comfortably read an article with less distractions from family and friend.
In conclusion, it is my considered opinion that public libraries will still remain more useful and available even after 10 years because they provide a condusive environment, and up-to-date information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49027237354 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84873964923 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.092824922 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.375 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.125 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296021336984 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130114510274 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829997975307 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151103010108 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086925616626 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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