With the advent of an online library, public libraries will soon be a thing of the past.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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However,with the arrival of online and local librar...
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...ver,with the arrival of online and local library, some think that public librarie...
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...braries will become an item of the past.I disagree with this view and the reasons...
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... to the advancement and proliferation of digital technology.they believe that wit...
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...they believe that with the use of mobile phones, laptops and data connection and ...
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...ptops and data connection and at the tap of ones finger tips ,an individual coul...
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... and data connection and at the tap of ones finger tips ,an individual could acces...
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... data connection and at the tap of ones finger tips ,an individual could access ...
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...ion and at the tap of ones finger tips ,an individual could access the internet ...
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...,an individual could access the internet and browse as much information as need...
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... access the internet and browse as much information as needed . Advocate of ...
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...nternet and browse as much information as needed . Advocate of this group be...
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...d browse as much information as needed . Advocate of this group believe that ...
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... information as needed . Advocate of this group believe that unlike the local...
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...p believe that unlike the local libaries,the online libraries could be accessed in ...
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...hat unlike the local libaries,the online libraries could be accessed in the comfo...
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... time of and day. On the other hand,there are compelling reasons why I do believ...
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... On the other hand,there are compelling reasons why I do believe that local libr...
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...ials gotten from the public library are hundred percent extremely reliable and accurate...
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... researched on and backed up with plenty evidence .In addition, public libraries ...
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...d on and backed up with plenty evidence .In addition, public libraries contain o...
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...on and backed up with plenty evidence .In addition, public libraries contain old...
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... evidence .In addition, public libraries contain old manuscripts, historical book...
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...ontain old manuscripts, historical books and modern fictions that contain varieti...
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...nd get concrete information. Secondly ,the public library is situated in an atm...
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...an atmosphere that is conducive to study,with less noise. individuals can comfortably...
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... is conducive to study,with less noise. individuals can comfortably read an article with le...
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...ls can comfortably read an article with less distractions from family and friend. ...
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...nd friend. In conclusion, it is my considered opinion that public libraries...
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... that public libraries will still remain more useful and available even after 10 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49027237354 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84873964923 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.092824922 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.375 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.125 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296021336984 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130114510274 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829997975307 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151103010108 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086925616626 0.056905535591 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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