Nowadays commercials are increasingly prevalent in daily life. This phenomenon, in many cases, should be more beneficial.
Many support the view that advertisements inform consumers about our choice. This means that many ads about a certain product with different prices issue customers with a comparison of the cost of a product which provides customers with the best choice. For example, the smartphone of Apple and Samsung is a good choice for the user my brother wants to buy a phone to create content in TikTok so he chooses the phone of Samsung because of its quality camera.
Admittedly, Ads with inappropriate have a negative impact on children’s minds. For instance, my younger sister always watches advertisements with violent content leading to a grumpy temper, fights with friends, and imitating violent acts in the commercials she sees. However, if parents strict control of children and educate them about the good and the best, which helps children not be attracted to them.
In conclusion, every problem has two sides so we should take advantage of the strengths of advertising to serve personal and societal needs.
- Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life Is it a positive or negative development 84
- The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops 73
- Some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experiences and personal qualities when they look for an employee Why is it the case Is it a positive or negative development 84
- A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income Unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the world 80
- Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk about the dangers of committing a crime To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2131147541 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85826304809 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650273224044 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7380477667 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0808111245914 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388387886562 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359099936969 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573879916928 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464256095975 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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