Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is negative.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Advertisement is a part and parcel of our daily life. we are exposed to them through almost all medium of information exchange. Television, billboards, newspapers, social media are just a few of them. The influence of advertisement has increased to such an extent that it becomes a necessity of our life. Thus the good and the bad of the advertisement world has to be discussed.
Advertisement has created a network between a product and its customer.Almost all of the information about a product or the possibilities of a products exsistence is conveyed through the medium of advertisement. Global advertisement has revolutionized the world economy. Due the accessibility of different products or same products with different brands customers now can compare and evalute products quality and pricing. which resulted in a competative market where product quality has increased manifold compared to its pricing. This was made possible because of the availability of the global advertisement. Even political advertisement has influenced people to choose their nation leaders based on similarities of ideas and plans between the general people and the political parties. which eventualy seals the fate of a country.
False advertisement is like an epidemic which not only fools a customer but also can create a chain reaction of misconceptions about a person,product or idea in the society. They can emotionaly make people to buy their products though providing lucricative promotions and offers at the cost of reduced product qualty. Now a days the facts has become fictions. Advetisement has become a media through which a company forced its ideas about its product to the people rather than providing the facts about it.Political parties are throughing dirt at each other. they are creating scandals to win the election. it has become a nasty business now a day due to the availability of social media advertisement. Now the people are really confused about what to believe and what not to.
Although, due to the fact that false advertisement can destroy the moral of the society, it is evident that what free flow of authentic information can bring in the world. Thus, Advertisement need not to be abolished but to be regulated by the law so that it can used for the common good of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1871657754 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1944889936 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494652406417 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.9473276109 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.380952381 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8095238095 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09523809524 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128906031674 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462515978637 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646326811888 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930470512982 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634751556316 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.