many peoples think that Now a day we have too many choices. to what extend do you agree or not.
Diversity is one of the most important survival technique. A number of people tend to believe that nowadays, they have more options to choose from. I totally agree with this proposition. Hence, this essay will describe how different factors, such as, increased market competition and globalization help product/service diversity.
Market competition has grown significantly over the years. It is one of the leading aspect behind the rising number of product varieties. As more companies are making similar goods, it is their innovative ideas or changes in details, which help them to gain profit by selling more than their competitors. For example, the tooth paste companies in recent years have created a number of product with distinct qualities based on people's preferences, which helped them to survive in the market by giving people what they want to have or to try and many of these manufacturing giants have shifted toward more organic production to keep up with recent trend. As a result, they are selling more items than their rivals.
Moreover, globalization brought a new dimension in market strategy planning. This is, due to the fact that more countries are willing to do business offshore rather than onshore, which is enabled by low export taxes imposed upon the local industries. Along with that, low transportation cost and availability of social advertisement helped globalization to increase diversity by distributing international products all over the world. For an instance, Unilever, a multi national company has a fair share of its profit coming from Bangladesh. Not only they are providing new products but also inventing an array of subsidiaries under the same class, which helped them to have greater control in the local business.
In conclusion, a substantial amount of people believe that they have a lot of options to choose from. This is certainly true and is made possible through globalization and a higher market competition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: try to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31309904153 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9746279149 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594249201278 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8858653177 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.9375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0936170261366 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025891448651 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420155437373 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576178017944 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239373901233 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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