After leaving school or university, young people should choose a job or career that they love, rather than one that pays the best salary. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowadays, many students who have graduated prefer chasing their dream by seeking a job that they love while others place more importance on taking a well-paid job. In my opinion, I believe that job satisfaction and job with high salaries should consider equally.
There are several reasons to explain why graduate students should find the career that they love. First of all, if you love the job, you will do not need a reason to get up early in the morning to work. People who enjoy their job look forward to going to their workplace every morning with a high spirit. Moreover, people who prefer their job will help them gain more experience because they work with full energy and passion. This makes them become experts in their field and have a high chance of success in their career path in the future.
On the other hand, if you pick up a job with a high salary, you will be able to stable your living standards such as paid living costs and entertainment. Besides, when you have money, you can focus on other problems like taking care of family and doing your hobby without any worries or stress. However, some people can not follow their idea because of the financial burden which causes stress and reduce people's health. For example, people who work as an artist, they will hard to get well paid if their painting does not satisfy their customer's demand.
In conclusion, choose job satisfaction to give lots of advantages to students on a better future while picking up a job pay the best salary is a good choice to work for the long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 23, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
...ustomers demand. In conclusion, choose job satisfaction to give lots of advantages...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60649819495 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25262079811 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592057761733 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5145400362 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0833333333 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236083778504 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946263274359 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382068259224 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149449857751 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277835521261 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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