After the success of so many companies a lot of people dream of setting up their own business. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this
Nowadays, many people think that setting up their own business is an excellent idea, but others do not agree. The issue frequently generates a great deal of heated debate. It is generally believed, since we have huge number of examples on two sides of the bridge. Let us start by considering pros and cons of it.
The main advantage of the topic is that when people create companies they need a lot of people for their startup. Thus, more humans have a job and the number of unemployed is decreasing. An additional major advantage of business. Setting up is an increasing level of economy in their countries. Countries get more money, as people make their own companies. For example, famous Russian programmer, Pavel Durov, made an analog of the Facebook. Project exploded on the country and in the moment it is the most popular social network in Europe. As a result, "Russian Facebook" brings enormous amount of money for Russian Federation and a lot of people have well-paid job.
A major drawback of this popular way is that we can not imagine a number of startups which were failed. A lot of people can not deal with company's problem, which appear everyday. Human becomes depressed and it will has bad finish. The United States of America is a good example of it. In 1930 they had economy crisis, which destroyed huge number of big and small companies. People did not know what to do and the number of suicide incidences was dramatically increased.
Taking everything in account, it must be said that you can create your own startup project, but you must realize possible consequences and always have a cool head.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: at the moment
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Suggestion: every day
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... possible consequences and always have a cool head.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, thus, well, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80427046263 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66368620986 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8806118522 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0526315789 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7894736842 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36842105263 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224815388352 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061408436361 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788030965547 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111687150027 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690516293325 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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