The ageing population is good for business, the economy and society. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The majority of governments in developing countries usually consider their increasingly greying population as an economic and social threat. Other, however, view this phenomenon as socially and economically advantageous. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
In modern life, as most parents are completely occupied by their employment, grandparents are usually family caretakers and babysitters, which not only help young parents focus on work to develop their career but also moral support for their children's fully upbringing process. In a way, it can be said that ageing people also contribute to economic growth in an indirect way. Furthermore, some employers tend to hire the elder than young people and there are reasons lead to this trend. Firstly, the seniors are more experienced so they are better at making crucial decisions in emergencies. Therefore, they ofter play a vital role as advisers in economic and political organizations. Secondly, many firms want to keep those who work at a long time to transfer hands-on experience to the young.
On the other hand, Ageing population is always associated with the scarcity of workforce. Japan, Sweden and other industrialized countries are facing a severe labour crisis due to even-rising life expectancy and older population and these are pushing them to the brink of the economic downturn. In addition, an increase in the proportion of the elderly population puts greater pressure on the pension and public healthcare systems, these result in the growing burden on the government and taxpayers. Finally, there is also a direct impact on business revenues, as older people prefer saving rather than investing, particularly substantial purchases such as property and vehicles.
In conclusion, it is true that there are several problems associated with an ageing population. Nevertheless, those problems only do a little damage to the development of society. I personally think when people live longer, society as a whole will be able to reap greater benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an indirect way" with adverb for "indirect"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42452830189 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97865811685 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632075471698 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8688914163 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9375 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131530928612 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411151144108 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432974619439 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778469357437 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429906661098 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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