air travek should be restricted because of pollution and uses up the world's fuel. Agree or disagree?
Pollution is a major threat to the world and as the situation is getting more worse,people are always looking for methods to reduce its adverse effects. In this context one of the argument given is to restrict air travel as it causes pollution and waste’s the fuel. However, I do not agree with these statement.
Firstly, the invention of air travel has been one of the major achievements of technology. This has lead to better connectivity between the entire world. Before aeroplanes ships were used to travel and transport goods which consumed a lot of time. With airplanes these time has certainly reduced. Also these helps in exploring new parts of the world which were never reached before. Because of these the trade relations between countries have also improved. Apart from these a lot of people travel to other places to study or for some research work. These helps in spreading knowledge and awareness along with developing a sense of friendliness.
Moreover, the air travel mediums are not the only or the major contributors to pollution. Cars and two wheelers generate more amount of harmful gases than airplanes. Also the fuel consumption of aeroplanes is very economical considering the purpose they serve. Countries use them in defense sector as they play a major role.
Nevertheless, there are certain areas air travel can be restricted and concerns of pollution and fuel consumption can be reduced. The air mediums should only be ued when travelling by other modes like trains is not possible. Many VIPS often use their personal jets to travel nearby places these must be stopped. Also the transportation of goods must be done by other means like ships or trains if they are environment friendly.
Finally, we conclude that airtravel could not be completely blamed for pollution or extensive fuel consumption but there are certain areas were it can be avoided.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...e world and as the situation is getting more worse,people are always looking for methods t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...d as the situation is getting more worse,people are always looking for methods to reduc...
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Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this statement' or 'these statements'?
Suggestion: this statement; these statements
... the fuel. However, I do not agree with these statement. Firstly, the invention of air travel...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...lanes these time has certainly reduced. Also these helps in exploring new parts of t...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... world which were never reached before. Because of these the trade relations between co...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...amount of harmful gases than airplanes. Also the fuel consumption of aeroplanes is v...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...el nearby places these must be stopped. Also the transportation of goods must be don...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07051282051 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74728476019 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6824443064 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239366961772 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644776943041 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591089701054 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133704080269 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596068392487 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.