As air travel has become cheaper, more and more people are travelling abroad for their vacations instead of visiting places in their own country. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this?
As air travel has become cheaper, more and more people are travelling abroad for their vacations instead of visiting places in their own country. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Travelling oversea with a reasonable price certainly has provided several positive benefits for tourists in recent days. However, this action leads to the fact that people spend less time exploring the beauty spots of their own countries, creating not only significant values but also tremendous drawbacks.
On the one hand, visiting a whole different land will fascinate travelling lovers. Firstly, the exotic culture can be attractive to tourists with indelible experiences. For example, Western travellers who are comfortable with having meals with fork and knife are expected to undergo an unforgettable moment as trying using chopsticks when stepping foot on Asian countries. Moreover , people can have a chance to enrich precious knowledge about the civilizations of their destinations such as history, traditions, cuisine, etc.
On the other hand , a preference for aboard travel over domestic one likely causes potential risks. Being strongly attracted to the beauty of other countries sometimes also means individuals neglect their own culture. Consequently, they find it strange and difficult to carry the nation’s heritage successfully. For example, according to the latest statistics (of …?), 88% of the Russian population know American culture better than their s as a matter of fact that they travel to this country a lot . Moreover, the economy of a nation would be remarkably affected if their community ignored visiting nation landscapes. Tourism, which is one of the most influential aspects of country development, requires an enormous amount of attention and contribution from their society.
In conclusion , whereas cheap flight tickets offer people exciting aboard vacations with several advantages as experiencing new things and opportunities to broaden their minds, they also bring about the weakened awareness about the national culture of people and burdens in economic issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63406940063 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92574949254 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649842271293 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2862734722 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.066666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469753984281 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14326082668 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187483469925 0.0667982634062 281% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302942584651 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.316670444712 0.056905535591 556% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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