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A remarkable number of criminals serving their first prison sentence get out of jail just only to reoffend. This is caused maily due to the fact that they have to spend time in such an unsuitable environment in and lack of education. There are two ideal solutions in order to tackle this problem.
Firstly, it is believed that jail has never been a right place to re-educate offenders. Being mixed with other people with diverse offences can increase the chances of commit crimes once more time. Specifically, people exchange experiences of their illegal actions in prison to each other, leading to curiosity. Secondly, a high percentage of these individuals are considered to be uneducated before being put into prison. As a matter of fact, they do prohibited things in order to make a living. Moreover, they do not bear in minds the legality of their actions but the amount of money they can receive.
This issue can be dealt with by various measures. The first vital remedy is based on the act of government. It is crucial that criminals are able to access practical skills and gain more job opportunities. Therefore, the more desires to earn money genuinely are sympathized and accepted, the fewer illegal cases appears. Besides, allowing criminals to do community service instead of making them stay in jail also brings efficiency. Helping others enables them realize the postiveness of living worthily. Consequently, the tendecy of commit crimes are scaled down.
To recapitulate, only when criminals are put in the jeopardy of poverty and improper environment do they commit crimes again. It is the responsibilty of not only government but also society to offer them must-have soft skills, knowledge and advantageous community work so as to spark off a better progress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 605, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...owledge and advantageous community work so as to spark off a better progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0819112628 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81943903109 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610921501706 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2964716191 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7222222222 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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