All fathers should be entitled to time off from work when their children are born. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The role of father of primary importance for any household. It is believed that all male parents should be allowed to take their parternity leaves when their infants are given birth. I somewhat concur with this suggestion as it not only strengthens the bonds between fathers and their newborn babies but provides meaningful support to their beloved wives.
Permitting leaves of new fathers renders valuable family time for them to stimulate the natural development of their babies. It is thought that the presence of fathers at home would play as role models for their little children, which is essential for them to develop fundamental skills such as speaking, crawling, and walking. If male employees are unable to stay at their safe havens when their new family members are born, it is likely that the new babies may more or less find it difficult to learn necessary patterns of behavior.
Given their husbands' apprearance, wives can receive emotional and physical assistance from their loved one. It is undeniable that prenancy is one the foremost periods of any woman. At this stage, females may become overly emotional and bear extreme pain. The assistance of their husbands thus is crucial to eliminate their partners' negative feelings and supply them with nessecary aid. Pregnant women, therefore, feel more comfortable which facilitates their childbirth, and relives them of stress as a result.
Admittedly, the absence of male workers from work can do their companies a disservice. This is especially the case for professions that require specialized experts. To illustrate, soldiers in special forces who are absent from important missions, may place the tasks at higher risk of failure, as there might be not viable to have replacements of the individuals. In the long term, however, granting days off for male staff when they have babies, would give the wage-earners a sense of job satisfaction.
In sum, I mostly side with the view that male parental roles should be officially entitled to absence, while they have newborn children. This merits both their wives and the children, even though it may take its toll on their workplaces.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, such as, as a result, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18285714286 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67713523402 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597142857143 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3896624055 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.705882353 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254680899262 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749173254375 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053231918066 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137924839948 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364115437349 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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