all over the world, the number of overweight people is growing .what do you think are the main causes of this? what are effects?
The swelling number of obese people is perturbing issue in today`s life. This phenomenon is substantially associated with lifestyle choices such as poor eating habits, lack of exercise and physical activity. Unfortunately, this trend triggers unescapable physical and mental disorders. These causes and effects will be analysed in this essay.
In regard to predominant reasons of obesity, American nutritionists state that obesity among people, particularly within industrial and developed nations residents, moves in tandem with a sedentary lifestyle and unhealthy diet plans. Today`s modern style force people to adopt the less active way of leaving; they ride on vehicles to workplace, spend extended time sitting, purchase online and receive daily requirements through a call. Likewise, most people unconsciously eat surplus calories which means their input calories is more than their output energy ultimately leads to gain weight. Fast foods, processed and convenient foods consumption play a good example. Moreover, scientists of FDA, Food and Drug Administration, revealed that large percent of the American youth lack any information about hidden calories in junk foods, with this comes numerous number of obese citizens who have not been informed about healthy diet programme and exercise regime in order to prevent gaining unwanted weight of fat.
The inevitable consequences of obesity on human`s health are tremendous; being overweight act as a catalyst for a shorter life span due to severe diseases such as diabetes, cancer, stroke and high blood pressure. As an illustration, several studies published in WHO, world health organisation, represent that obese adolescents suffer from at least one physical ailment stem from a high level of body mass index. Also, obesity results in mental illnesses, for example, lower self-steam, anxiety and depression. Hence, it seems these obvious health deterioration trend would proceed to impact on generation to come.
To conclude, this essay discussed lifestyle options contribute to being overweight and critical impacts of obesity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, at least, for example, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76923076923 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94307570559 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705128205128 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.6449331502 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.571428571 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101509515481 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368197382394 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396698722789 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698865468872 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438378409977 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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