alternative sources are better than fossil fuels.
agree or disagree?
Fossil fuels known as one of the most important resources of energy in world wide. Beside this, in recent decades, use of other sources e.g: wind, solar and even nuclear energy increase strictly in many countries. In spite of the some drawbacks in utilizing these sources, I strongly believe that using of these sources have many advantages for individuals and governments, and is a positive invest.
There are several reasons for this view that alternative sources such as wind or solar are beneficial for people. In my view, the most important reason is, reduce pollution in cities, and decrease of disease among individuals. Nowadays, the majority of cars and companies utilize of fossil fuels for energy production. The emission of toxic gases from these machines like CO2 and CO can have detrimental impacts on the individual’s healthy and ozone layer. The hearth problem and breath damages because of air pollution are the sample of these diseases. In addition, penetrate of ozone layer also, lead to publish of X-ray on the surface earth, that is destructive for human skin, and can become cause of skin illnesses. Alternative energies, not only, do not have any above negative effects, but also help to air pollution and do not have harmful for people. for this reason are suitable for using.
Another reason for being benefit alternative sources is, these resources are infinity and more cheaper than fossil fuels. According to witnesses of researcher, fossil fuels (e.g: oil, coil and gas) will finished by 2050. Therefore, the governments should find other sources for replacing it. Wind and solar are the best substitute because, they are accessible everywhere and also, have a sufficient powerful for energy production in companies and cars. Likewise, the cost of their production is much inexpensive compared to fossil fuels. We need the advance technologies and machines for drilling earth and extraction of petroleum or gas. But, for producing of solar energy, for example, we need the number of plate placed in front of the sun.
Nonetheless, we should consider this subject that, using of wind or solar energy, have depend on the area conditions. For example: in Canada or polar areas we cannot use of solar plates, because of sun lack in more period of years.
To sum up, utilization of replacing sources like wind or solar instead of fossil fuels, is an excellent idea not only for people throughout the world because of reducing illness(e.g: hearth and skin ailments), but also is beneficial for government because they are economical and available.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...e most important resources of energy in world wide. Beside this, in recent decades, use of...
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Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...e most important resources of energy in world wide. Beside this, in recent decades, use of...
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ctly in many countries. In spite of the some drawbacks in utilizing these sources, I...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ion and do not have harmful for people. for this reason are suitable for using. ...
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Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...es is, these resources are infinity and more cheaper than fossil fuels. According to witness...
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Line 9, column 202, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'finish'
Suggestion: finish
...ossil fuels e.g: oil, coil and gas will finished by 2050. Therefore, the governments sho...
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Line 11, column 88, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...at, using of wind or solar energy, have depend on the area conditions. For example: in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, likewise, nonetheless, so, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, in my view, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1567695962 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70646712785 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53919239905 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5985242265 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.380952381 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0476190476 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1370854497 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047495282939 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678844356913 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081653039569 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559299127293 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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