Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the main source for the majority of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The widespread problem of whether or not newspapers are of no paramount importance these days has emerged as a topic of deeply-ingrained concern. It is my firm belief that newspapers still play a vital but not main role in providing news for the following reasons.
To begin with, plenty of advocates are inclined towards the fact that reading materials have been and continue to contribute a significant part to the thriving of one’s country's economy. This is due to the fact that the majority of adults, especially senior citizens have the propensity to use newspapers as the familiar means of recreation and news providing. In addition, elderly are in favor of trusted and reliable sources of information, which are occasionally provided by famous journalists in the newsroom. Another noteworthy positive effect is that newspapers would stimulate the competition amongst media enterprises. To be more specific, journal companies’ effort to be not superseded and keep pace with world’s development coupled with their modern counterparts attempts to update up-to-a-minute news on online platforms would be a driving force for the flourish of the nation. Henceforth, economy would be the chief factor associated with the irreplaceability of the newspaper.
On the other hand, the idea of newspapers’ disadvantages are also well-grounded. Firstly, substituting paper materials by the online one would be favorable in terms of price and convenience. In addition, paper is no longer suitable due to its harmful effects to the environment. Therefore, with respect to transporting news, there is no surprise that people nowadays show their preference on the online platforms over its classic counterparts.
To sum up, it is imperative to thoroughly examine strengths and weaknesses of both means of news providing before introducing such a policy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The widespread problem of whether or not newspapers are of no paramount importan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, to begin with, to sum up, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46341463415 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27303282478 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613240418118 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8386093483 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138586884384 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403468202548 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351924789696 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713622276722 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308620641373 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.