Many people think it is very important to protect the environment but they
make no effort to do it themselves. Why is the case? What actions can be done
to encourage individuals to protect the environment?
The widespread problem of individual’s indifference towards environment degradation has emerged as a topic of deeply-ingrained concern. Several reasons are identified, associated with its solution to mitigate this distressing phenomenon.
As the world develops, the problem with regard to the exacerbation of surroundings without human protection has not been solved. As far as I am concern, in the more competitive world, people have been under invisible pressure to gain a prospective position in the society and as a result, lead to individual-oriented lifestyle. Therefore, it would be unreasonably to spend our time for environmental activities such as recycle or reuse in sacrifice of personal affairs. In addition, government means of control and penalty with an unstrict manner would be a substantially factor. To be more specify, in a common sense, people, even well manner or well-educated person, occasionally have slight bias in favor of littering in public spaces rather than keeping it for friendly environmental purposes.
Some feasible measures should be taken to mitigate the aforementioned problem. Known as a majority of population, the underprivileged citizens have the lack of opportunity to be informed about protecting environment due to their financial conditions. Therefore, gaining better insight for the poor with respect to the surroundings would be highly recommended in order to alleviating this phenomenon. Also, it is the government liability to enforcing strictly ban for their inhabitants in the efforts to lower the cases of environmentally crime.
In conclusion, there are indeed various repercussions regarding this distressing phenomenon yet, they can solved one according measures are enlisted imperatively.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 556, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('substantially') instead an adjective, or a noun ('factor') instead of another adjective.
...enalty with an unstrict manner would be a substantially factor. To be more specify, in a common sense,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'solve'
Suggestion: solve
...is distressing phenomenon yet, they can solved one according measures are enlisted imp...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, with regard to, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7984496124 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58184835552 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647286821705 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6994694923 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138084096571 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462039088366 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342191253055 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759591728841 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282156244666 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 556, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('substantially') instead an adjective, or a noun ('factor') instead of another adjective.
...enalty with an unstrict manner would be a substantially factor. To be more specify, in a common sense,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'solve'
Suggestion: solve
...is distressing phenomenon yet, they can solved one according measures are enlisted imp...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, with regard to, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7984496124 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58184835552 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647286821705 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6994694923 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138084096571 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462039088366 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342191253055 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759591728841 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282156244666 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.