Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?
Although the Internet news is increasingly read, the press will still be the leading news source for most people. Personally, I completely agree that reading news online can bring benefits to netizens in many ways more than printed newspapers do.
There are two main reasons why using the Internet to catch up on the latest news is more common nowadays. One reason is that it gives people instant access to a mixed range of information on almost any subject, much more than a normal newspaper can give. Moreover, they can read content in any language from any country in the world, thus, it is useful for those who want to learn another language but in a relaxed and informative way. Take The New York Times, for example, individuals especially teenagers who want to explore the world while just staying at home with a digital device can easily read the global news about global warming effects. It not only increases their vocabulary about that topic but also gives a deep insight about why and how it is happening and ways to prevent it.
Furthermore, the Internet allows anybody to publish their own writing since it costs nothing to publish or approach a huge amount of information through the net. Therefore, citizens will have more opportunities to have a fun, creative job with a decent salary. Meanwhile, the non-stop progress of the technology industry has unfolded the possibility to upload videos and voice records on various online websites to provide news in different ways for people to have more options to choose from.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I disagree that printed newspapers would continue to be the most crucial source of information because more and more people will be drawn to use the Internet.
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- The diagram below shows the process of making olive oil Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below Write at least 150 words 71
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90235690236 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57079912694 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599326599327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.9396656209 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.363636364 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389122031002 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14112769127 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110926265218 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26124458227 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11200835194 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.