Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that many people use the Internet with the purpose of watching important news. While others believe that printed newspapers will still be a major news source. In my opinion, I believe that print newspapers will soon be changed by the influence of internet newspapers
On the one hand, traditional newspapers are an ideal way for many people to update news, even in the modern world. Firstly, nowadays, there is a lot of wrong information on the internet that makes people feel worried, so printed newspapers are more reliable because people can not edit the information in the newspaper and make people feel safer while obtaining information. Secondly, the quality of newspapers provides readers with a sense of comfort. Some people like holding a real newspaper in their hands, and taking notes or highlighting important information on the newspaper while reading.
On the other hand, I still believe that online media will replace printed media soon. To begin with, the online newspaper can instantly access the reports of what has happened around the world, so people can update news anytime at their disposal. With a smartphone or laptop, people do not have to wait for newspaper delivery. Furthermore, when they read online newspapers, readers do not have to pay money to read all the latest news and reading an interesting online magazine helps them save a significant amount of money on newspaper weekly fees.
In conclusion, although traditional newspapers can be an excellent source of information, I believe that online news will be popular with readers in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the purpose of watching important news. While others believe that printed newspapers ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15708812261 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72562213368 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536398467433 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3923921383 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.363636364 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329604512782 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128436880669 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531503351319 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204714700538 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318231050541 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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