Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
Opinions are divided on whether newspapers will be regarded to be one of the main essential sources of news, given that more people choose reading news on the internet, or not. Although reading news on the internet has many beneficials, I am in the opinion that newspapers are always a necessary news source.
Nowadays, it is true that more and more inhabitants get the newest information through the internet, which is related to convenience and cost. With regard to the former, if citizens want to update new information, they will get access to onlines platforms or applications by using personal assistants. This can also permit them to read news everytime and everywhere regardless of geographical barriers. With regard to the latter, using the internet can save a huge amount of money spending on purchasing newspapers each month. The magazines called The Times, for example, cost more than 20$ every month, which compares to 0$ through the internet.
In contrast, newspapers will always remain the most crucial source of news. First of all, the latest news, which are published in the newspapers, are checked before sending to the audiences. Various websites, for instance, provide a large amount of information that is unrealistic to attract more viewers for finance. The second reason is that newspapers contain out of date newsfeed for a period of time which is also recorded as historical highlights of a country. This can also pass for the next generations around the world.
In conclusion, it can be denied that news on the internet plays a significant role on a daily basis. However I believe that newspapers will remain the most essential source of news.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to read'.
Suggestion: to read
... of news, given that more people choose reading news on the internet, or not. Although ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers are always a necessary news source. Nowadays, it is true that more and more ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$20'.
Suggestion: $20
... The Times, for example, cost more than 20$ every month, which compares to 0$ throu...
^^^
Line 3, column 623, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$0'.
Suggestion: $0
...than 20$ every month, which compares to 0$ through the internet. In contrast, ...
^^
Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...pers contain out of date newsfeed for a period of time which is also recorded as historical hi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ys a significant role on a daily basis. However I believe that newspapers will remain t...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, it is true, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09057971014 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79269336141 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.51522146 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414752400852 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144890954815 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124949866263 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270281421958 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986403592073 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to read'.
Suggestion: to read
... of news, given that more people choose reading news on the internet, or not. Although ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers are always a necessary news source. Nowadays, it is true that more and more ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$20'.
Suggestion: $20
... The Times, for example, cost more than 20$ every month, which compares to 0$ throu...
^^^
Line 3, column 623, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$0'.
Suggestion: $0
...than 20$ every month, which compares to 0$ through the internet. In contrast, ...
^^
Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...pers contain out of date newsfeed for a period of time which is also recorded as historical hi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ys a significant role on a daily basis. However I believe that newspapers will remain t...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, it is true, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09057971014 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79269336141 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.51522146 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414752400852 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144890954815 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124949866263 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270281421958 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986403592073 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.