Many people hold the belief that newspapers will exist as the most significant site to give information, notwithstanding the increasingly widespread use of reading news through the Internet. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this statement.
It is unequivocal that the Internet brings us numerous benefits. First and foremost, its accessibility seems to contribute remarkably to its popularity. In this digital age, most people have electronic devices such as smartphones and computers, which can be interconnected to serve the human purpose of gaining insights. Moreover, online news is up-to-the-minute, which promotes its far-reaching influence on the public trend. Thanks to technological breakthroughs, transmitting information among devices is gradually being replaced by automation in wireless networks, maximizing the speed of sharing data. For instance, Facebook that is a well-known media site always keeps its database up-to-date every few minutes.
In contrast, the downsides of conventional newspapers are seemingly considerable. First of all, cost to purchase some newspapers is regarded as a large-scale concern. Recent years have witnessed the falling circulation of some journals due to their price. In 2012, for instance, some firms in the US went bankrupt owing to being too high-priced for readers. In this day and age, related-to-environment effects are one of the strong reasons to deteriorate the role of traditional newspapers. In this day and age, some environmental issues stem from the consumption of papers which are used to print newspaper.
To sum up, it is widely acknowledged that people mainly opt the Internet to update their news, yet the long-standing form is unlikely to be common in the future.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 63
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue this is leading to negative consequences Discuss both views and give your opinion 95
- Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion 91
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ate the role of traditional newspapers. In this day and age, some environmental is...
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Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s widely acknowledged that people mainly opt the Internet to update their news, y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in contrast, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61742424242 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47808756215 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643939393939 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4175979274 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144147291313 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423242412676 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618387467813 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105270110435 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775828323191 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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