Although more and more people read the news on internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?
Many readers look for news online today, but there are a large number of people who prefer to read newspapers for significant news reports and details. This essay disagrees that people largely read the printed publication because most of the news is readily available on the Internet and access to online news are free of charge nowadays.
There are numerous news articles already available online. Major news outlets such as the New York Times, the Guardian, and the Daily Mail have their own websites for readers to access to latest news updates in which conventional newspapers usually do not include. Any news coverage unfolds during an event, the media would report on their website live. For instance, a Singaporean news outlet called the Strait Times, covered the entire event of the North Korea-United States summit in the city of Singapore, providing quick and informative updates on the day of the summit online and later publishing headlines and an overview of the summit on its printed papers the following day. Readers who wanted to keep up with the latest coverage can easily read through the reports on their palms to save time to flip through pages after pages.
Nowadays, online news articles are mostly free of charge. People do not have to pay to read news and obtain information as technology has become more advanced these days. Also, not buying newspapers could help to reduce the number of trees being cut down. As for news subscription, online subscribers can enjoy reading premium contents on their electronic devices compared to those who prefer to enjoy the printed stack, as this not only saves money and woods but also time. To exemplify, the Guardian’s website contains various sections such as national news, global news, entertainment news, and opinions, for free and none of its articles are required to be paid.
In conclusion, there is an increasing number of news readers who prefer to surf on the Internet to read the news because of the huge number of articles and reports being published online and they can have unpaid access to obtain information easily, and hence saving money, trees and time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ok for news online today, but there are a large number of people who prefer to read newspapers fo...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...heir own websites for readers to access to latest news updates in which conventional news...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02240896359 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50375358664 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518207282913 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5980914036 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.923076923 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4615384615 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305303306456 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124576305507 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757890909288 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205711027086 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079105671562 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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