Art classes like paiting and drawing are important to students' development and should be made compulsory in high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the current era of globalization, education has witnessed plenty of colossal developments in educational content. Nowadays many schools are offering art classes like painting and drawing into their curriculum. I agree with those who contend that artistic lessons gain an important in students’ improvement and should be brought into a compulsory course in high school.
Art plays a vital role in shaping a person’s values in formative years, especially children and teenagers. Firstly, art could enhance students’ imaginary throughout colors and formations. drawing helps them express their deep thoughts, which not only unwinds themselves but also shows their abilities. Secondly, painting and drawing courses open for students more opportunities to seek a variety of occupations. By acknowledging different perspectives, students could expand their horizon of career paths. A case in point is that students who are following both science courses and art ones can enlarge their choices to grow up as a business person or an artist depending on their capabilities. This case would change traditional beliefs amongst Asian people who always hope that children to become a lawyer, a doctor, etc.
Furthermore, art classes should not be optional in this day and age, but a must. Students will have chances to absorb art knowledge equally like other subjects. In terms of reputation, art should be considered as valuable as math or science due to its contributions. Being compulsory in schools makes art universal and available for all, regardless of their backgrounds. For instance, parents always have their children take science or math classes instead of art or music once due to their neglecting of the influence of art to students’ development. This action can help the older generation take into the necessary of offering art courses into the current curriculum.
In conclusion, art classes bring colossal benefits for education and society. I concur with developing art courses in high school more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49201277955 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07926564626 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8730059388 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272867039025 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924522968149 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663072255213 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19218321685 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722996634806 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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