ART CLASSES LIKE PAINTING AND DRAWING ARE IMPORTANT TO STUDENTS’ DEVELOPMENT AND SHOULD BE MADE COMPULSORY IN HIGH SCHOOL. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
Since artistically oriented classes in high school are significantly flourishing in the recent years, an increasing number of people embrace the idea of compelling students to participate in this categories these of classes. From my perspective, it is not worthwhile to make art classes mandatory for all pupils in high school on account of several reasons.
A group of people believe that having compulsory art classes is comparatively beneficial to the development of pupils. Compared with scientific subjects, artistic ones are obviously the stimulus of student’s imaginary and creativity derived from the inspiration of products created by the prominent such as Leonardo da Vinci or Mozart. Additionally, it is proven that students who opt for occupations such as musician or artist will demonstrate exceptional talents, which may help them produce such outstanding performances and become prolific figures, thus enhancing the national stature.
It would be an overstatement to claim that making art classes compulsory does not bring any disadvantages. One problem with this approach is that many students may not welcome this subject if they are not artistically endowed. For example, some students who do not possess impeccable voices may find singing obviously embarrassing, which will not only result in the eventual confidence deprivation but also a decrease in class efficiency. Besides, that an enormous number of high school students whose innate abilities on crucial scientific fields such as Mathematics, Physics or Biology are forced to consume a considerable amount of time for arts may lead to the inadequacy of appropriate environment that can fully take advantage of their prospects, thus wasting the potential human resources of the nations.
In conclusion, art classes are advantageous, yet they are not recommended to be obligatory for every high school student. Instead, these classes should be made optional so that students will have their own choice of subjects with a view to strengthening the necessary skills and pursuing the desirable careers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56918238994 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14897344865 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8732992152 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.0 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247371421547 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100607823951 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563930609381 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156300252941 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467148124592 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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