The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Due to technological advancements, our life has come to ease. Physical activities had been reduced over the period of time. We can perform almost every kind of work by sitting at one place, whether the work is of transferring money, or shopping, or booking train tickets. But these modern advancements also negatively affect our health because everything is so hassle-free without including any physical activity. This leads to the problems such as obesity, back pain, etc. In this essay, we will understand the causes of such issues and also how to alleviate such problems.
The outbreak of different viruses has introduced drastic issues in today's lifestyle. For instance, due to the outbreak of covid-19, the world has come to halt. We have lost many lives due to the virus. Even though today, vaccines are available still there is constant deterioration in people's health. This will continue further if we do not take precautionary measures. One of the solutions to deal with this problem is maintaining social distance, wearing a mask, having a healthy diet which will help in increasing immunity.
Furthermore, human activities such as industrialization, deforestation, constant mining, etc. lead to major problems such as global warming. Increasing levels of global warming, pollution have adverse effects on human health. Due to air pollution lung and respiratory diseases are increasing day by day and this is a never-ending situation because of which health conditions have plunged. This will continue we, ourselves do not take care of ourselves. Even though advancements in the medical field have reached the apex still maintaining good immunity is a must. This is one way out if we want healthy life ahead. To prove this let's take an example of my neighbor, who was diagnosed with coronavirus recently. But unlike other patients, he was not drastically affected by the virus because he had very good immunity which made him fight the virus. Even though he was ill he did his exercise and took the medications, which were prescribed by his doctor, religiously.
In conclusion, it is a clear picture that if we fail to take care of ourselves and our environment then certainly our health is going to abate. But, if we took the necessary measures then we are likely to have a healthy future ahead. Along with this, we have medical technologies to help us throughout.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, then, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09462915601 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94325513113 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7837057891 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.68 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.64 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0921636773512 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266630903024 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253378577136 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596846761037 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00921991111455 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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