The bar chart provides data about the figure for students who choose their favorite subjects and divides these subject groups into female and male students in a school in 2009.
Overall, The rate of selecting subjects for both men and women had some fluctuations. Although girls initially had a lower rate, it outraced boys at the end and equal in history subject of the period.
Males'rate was about 75% in Maths, being higher than Females'rate by approximately 20%. Then, it fell to almost 50% dramatically in English. However, the figure showed a gradual increase to just over 60% in Science, and continued to decline steadily to almost 45% in History and hitting a low-point of about 30% in Geography, then increased by approximately 10% in Art at the end of the period
The percentage of Female students in Maths was less than 60% and increased by around 5% in English after which this figure fell sharply to almost 50% and then this was followed by a sharp fall to 45% in History. However, the figure experienced a steady growth in Geography, it rose to approximately 3% and remained steady for the Art, outracing the rate of Male students
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...tely 10% in Art at the end of the period The percentage of Female students in Mat...
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...Art, outracing the rate of Male students
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81313131313 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69852506885 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.323459445 49.4020404114 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.142857143 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.058703256083 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279185590191 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233464472347 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.038796207687 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192606860657 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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