The best way for the government to solve traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is suggested that offering continuous public transport for all days and nights is the key to solving traffic jams in most countries. In my opinion, this is not a wise solution.
It seem that provide free public transportation 7 days 24 hours can attract some citizens to take public transport, thus reducing the use of private cars and eventually solving traffic congestion issues. However, this approach wouldn’t be as effective as expected. The fact that people still choose to drive to commute despite of the low cost of buses in most countries proves that money is not the main reason that discourages people from using public transportation. So if government made public transport free, the situation would not be greatly changed.
What’s worse, making public transport free all the time would create wastefulness. There are fewer needs for transport at night time. So keeping the buses running with no or just one passenger would be a waste of government budget, especially when this money is raised from residents’ taxes. As a result, instead of tackling the problem to win the voters’ compliments, such policy may promote resident’s dissatisfaction towards their governments for not appropriately using their money.
Instead, there are other ways that are more sustainable. One suggestion would be to impose traffic congestion taxes on cars coming to the cities. This approach requires less government investment and is easier to act on. Another way would be to create a well-designed public transportation that is more efficient and reliable. The main reason that people prefer cars to buses or trains is the flexibility cars bring. They do not want to rush to the bus station and found that bus left earlier, leaving them waiting for another 20 or 30 minutes. If government add more buses in rush hours, residents would be more confident in commuting through public transportation, without worrying about being late for their study or work.
To conclude, comparing with providing public transport 24 hours a day and 7 days a week, imposing traffic congestion taxes and adding more public transport in peak travel periods are more feasible and sustainable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
..., this is not a wise solution. It seem that provide free public transportation...
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Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...time. So keeping the buses running with no or just one passenger would be a waste ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28045325779 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99542353841 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560906515581 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4949273125 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325713965922 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957770530882 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103709261089 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203241256026 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870442253619 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.