The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that the best solution to the traffic congestion problem is providing cost-free mass transit all the time. From my point of view, I strongly disagree with this opinion.
First of all, operating a free public transport system every hour and every day seems to be unnecessary. In fact, overcrowded roads merely happened during specific periods of time depending on the time of working. At night or daylight, the number of commuters moving on the roads is lessened, and as a result, lots of public vehicles are not being used. For instance, in some metropolises in Vietnam, roads are often clogged in the morning and evening, at the time when people go to work or get off work. However, not many Vietnamese people go outside at night, which means public busses may carry no passengers after10 p.m.
Secondly, supporting public transport without any charge would put a financial burden on the nation’s economic development. Residents might be required to pay more taxes on transportation services, which they even hardly use due to their inconvenience and being time-consuming. Instead of that, citizens would prefer to use private vehicles because of the crowd and less comfort they may face in buses and trains. Hence, after making massive investments, traffic jams will increase since people still use their vehicles. Also, there are other equally essential fields that I therefore believe need investing such as health care, education and infrastructure construction.
In conclusion, from my perspective, supplying free transport services would be inevitably unnecessary and a satisfactory solution to the economy of the country to tackle this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3045112782 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89550082683 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676691729323 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5735970677 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.583333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148668252128 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508306910446 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636968786671 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897300128174 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525628567824 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.