Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some business to move from cities to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is argued that entrepreneurs should move their business to the countryside due to traffic and housing issues. Although there are some drawbacks of this policy, I believe that these are outweighed by the benefits.
On the one hand, the movement of businesses from metropolitan areas to the outskirts could adversely affect their operation. The first problem is that the new location will be far from companies’ target customers. As a result, these potential customers would opt for other alternative products or services in the city instead of traveling between distant places to meet their needs, which makes a significant reduction in firms’ revenue. The other major problem is that companies might face the risk of losing their high-quality workforce. It becomes clear that no one is willing to settle down in the suburbs where there is a lack of facilities, such as public transit vehicles, shopping centers or medical services. Thus, they would choose to seek another job to maintain their current living standards.
On the other hand, I believe moving business centers from cities to suburban areas would be much more beneficial. First of all, such relocation of organisations could help to relieve overcrowding in the urban areas. The clearest example of this is that people from rural areas, who work for those companies, would no longer have to travel to city centers to work, thus reducing the demand for accommodation and the intensity of traffic during peak hours. Secondly, by adopting this policy, these firms could create more opportunities, boosting the development of deprived areas. For instance, countryside dwellers can opt to work in factories with higher pay rather than agricultural work, which can help them improve their standards of living, thereby paving way for the growth of the national economy.
In conclusion, while I acknowledge that companies could be negatively affected when relocating to less-developed provinces, I believe that governments should implement this policy because of considerable benefits to our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37846153846 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89000563051 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609230769231 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.274155811 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.857142857 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181495988854 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606714466379 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614976016122 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109755081077 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512193147367 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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