Nowadays, traffic jam is a major problem in some developed countries. Some governments provide the best option to reduce the traffic congestion is establishing more free public transport for whole day. I disagree with this view.
Perhaps the main reason cause the traffic congestion is not only a large number of private transports but also road system. It can be said that although the government provide more free public transport, citizens still use their private cars or motorbikes for emergency cases and convenience. Thus, this method just slightly decrease the volume of traffic but it cannot solve completely the traffic problems. In the fact that traffic jam cause by the narrow roads which are not sufficient spaces for the huge amount of vehicle and some roads are obsolete infrastructure that make cars or commuters move slowly such as broken road surface. As a result, I believe that the government should open roads more wider and improve the road system.
In addition, providing free public transport are costly the national budget due to using its resources in 24 hour per day. Actually, the traffic congestion is only happen in the rush hours, so it is pointless if free public transport services are used all the time. For long term, this solution will take a tremendous cost from the government budget, but transportation department may not address the root of major issue. As a consequence, investing those money in road facilities will be a best way not only enhancing the national infrastructure but also the country views.
In conclusion, providing the free public transportations is not a best way to reduce the traffic congestion, the government should focus to improve and extend the quality of roads.
- Some people say that what children watch influences their behaviour. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behaviour most. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 61
- It is more important for school children to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- 1. In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this? 62
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 87
- Some people say that money can make life easier and more comfortable But others say that having a great amount of wealth can bring some problems What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of having a lot of money 93
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Nowadays, traffic jam is a major problem in some developed count...
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...owadays, traffic jam is a major problem in some developed countries. Some govern...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ause the traffic congestion is not only a large number of private transports but also road system...
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Line 2, column 700, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'wider' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: wider
...e that the government should open roads more wider and improve the road system. In additi...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...budget due to using its resources in 24 hour per day. Actually, the traffic congesti...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
...ajor issue. As a consequence, investing those money in road facilities will be a best way n...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... those money in road facilities will be a best way not only enhancing the nationa...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... the free public transportations is not a best way to reduce the traffic congesti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, still, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10211267606 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79930020373 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552816901408 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4289267561 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353497763173 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127034740391 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101424547972 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238478002413 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064681460481 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.