Some people say that what children watch influences their behaviour. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behaviour most. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there are a number of television programs for children. While somebody argue that the content of the programs impact on their children actions, others believe that their behaviour are influenced by spending too much on television. In my opinion, it is the contain of the programs that impact on youngster behaviour.
On the one hand, excessive watching television programs impact the children behaviour. Firstly, kids who spent amount of time on TV programmes, they may become addicted to watching the television. This means that children waste a huge time front of TV, they will neglect engagement in outdoor activities and have sedentary lifestyle in future. Moreover, watching many television channel can impair children communication skills, so they are hard to play and live in social. As a result, this undermines youngsters’ interpersonal skills and makes children underperform both academically and socially.
On the other hand, the content of the television programs is a main reason which effects on younger viewers’ behaviour. This means that a number of the images are not suitable for children because of containing violence, sexual and drugs. Thus, it is significant that those materials are cause that make unhealthy habits and improper behaviour. For example, watching numerous violent films, children may have violent actions which can affect their peers or family. Consequence, with those actions, children life will be impacted in future.
In conclusion, though both factors have their own implications, I believe that the element with more considerable impacts on children is the content. Hence, parents should control their children’s TV viewing habits and teach them what they can watch.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...n programs for children. While somebody argue that the content of the programs impact...
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Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...uch on television. In my opinion, it is the contain of the programs that impact on youngste...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...activities and have sedentary lifestyle in future. Moreover, watching many television cha...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...actions, children life will be impacted in future. In conclusion, though both factors ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56390977444 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96500019996 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6818564408 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342210378835 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109858670332 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716587073445 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214234223953 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557115745036 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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