Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is true that there are many people choose to study academic at the university. Although it is necessary for their future careers, I agree that vocational training is also significant for society due to lack of qualified workers.
Perhaps the major reason why more vocationally-trained workers are required is the demand of society. It can be said that those workers who are graduated from vocational training play vital roles when buildings are constructed nor needed maintenance. For example, there are a variety of experience people such as electricians, plumbers or another trades are hired with a high annual salary to look after public and private buildings such as schools or hospitals. Moreover, in the fact that there are a large number of academic graduated students in some developed countries, resulting in a numerous younger generation are unemployment. As a consequence, despite a huge number of academic people, there is a range of such jobs that need more staffs who have a specific knowledge and practical skills.
Besides, the government should make more considerations to provide adequate vocational training to meet the need of the society. For instance, education department should analysis and encourage schools to improve their education systems by making changes in the curriculum and providing more workshops to teach practical skills. Furthermore, parents may also encourage their children to consider learning a skilled trade instead of academic study. Thus, if next generation has sufficient qualifies as well as real experience, they will achieve a good job.
In conclusion, I agree that it is vital that we encourage more people to do vocational training because without such skilled workers, society cannot function effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41818181818 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05334175417 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.149832532 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.166666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345885656841 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109410624491 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696549574104 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211508009609 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589399432851 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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