The best way to resolve the international environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree?
Many people hold the belief that the best solution to address environmental problems is to raise the price of fuel. While I think that this approach is effective to some extent, I disagree with the view that this is the most effective measure.
It is true that raising the cost of fuel can help address the problems of environmental degradation. Looking from an environmental perspective, it will discourage individuals and businesses from overconsuming fuel. As a result, this will decrease the amount of traffic and industrial emissions that constitute the principal source of greenhouse gases, hence slowing the process of global warming. This plan, however, should not be considered a holistic approach to the deterioration of the environment for it exerts a little effect on environmental degradation issues other than global warming, namely rampant habitat destruction due to illegal logging and animal trafficking.
Nevertheless, I would argue that there are several important alternations that must be taken into account such as imposing stringent laws on conservation and recovery of natural resources as well as illegal poaching and logging. Such actions will act as a deterrent to potential offenders and former convicts, thereby mitigating a wide range of environmental problems. This can be exemplified by the implementation of regulations in Vietnam, many law-breakers were heavily fined and received custodial sentences for poaching rhinos which have been put on red list recently.
In conclusion, while I am of the opinion that raising taxes on the cost of fuel is at best a short-term solution to the degradation of environment, more effective steps are required to deal with a wider range of environmental issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40959409594 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21082831131 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6846657995 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.6 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16092901349 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713262492705 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757320126726 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105655065084 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533473869217 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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