The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent what you agree or disagree?
That solutions should be implemented too protect environment has controversial. Several people believe that the most effective measure to tackle worldwide environmental degradation is to raise the cost of fossil fuels. I totally oppose to this view.
To begin with, the consumption of fossil fuels does not depend completely on the price ones and fuel is not only reason for environmental problems. First and foremost, environmental issues does not stem from only fossil fuels but also other causes. For instance, the development of production process from industrial zones discharge a huge mount of greenhouse emission gases onto atmosphere. This makes global warming happens more rapidly and environment is threatened dramatically. Besides, environmental pollution is caused by residents' habits. For example, a bunch of people litter the streets instead of sorting and throwing garbage on the trash bin. In addition, discharging toxic waste onto the rivers and illegal logging and deforestation are also bad activities which make environment more polluted.
In terms of solutions, there are some measures along with raising the cost of fuel to protect environment from pollution. One example for this method is that authority can fine heavily such as a mount of money to companies which discharge emission onto the land, water and air. Moreover, habitants' awareness about environmental problems need to be raised. In detailed, civilians can reduce the environment pollution by practical activities. Due to the fact that global warming derived from electricity, people can contributing on declining greenhouse emission gases by turning off the light bulbs in unnecessary cases or spending more eco-friendly devices.
In conclusion, increasing the price of fossil fuels is only small part in campaign to protect environment. Both government and individuals should make efforts and implement other solutions at collective level to reduce global environmental pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to protect'?
Suggestion: to protect
That solutions should be implemented too protect environment has controversial. Several ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68243243243 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08113294172 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4914402127 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9411764706 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102192272832 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355198244358 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495903308448 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673824950186 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390716376634 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.