The best way to solve world's environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree and give your own opinion.
It is argued that the most effective solution to tackle global environmental problem is to raise the price of fuel. While some individuals consider that it is the best way, I disagree with this opinion because not only fuel but also a variety of factors have harmed the environment.
On the one hand, there are some merits to increase the cost of fuel. Firstly, the higher price level is imposed the more fuel consumption people curb, which leads to cutting down on emissions. For instance, there would be many people who choose public traffic means instead of private cars. Secondly, while restricting exhaust fumes, people can also turn out environmentally friendly products which would replace fuel or transport vehicle running on fuel such as electric cars, electric bicycles.
On the other hand, it is obvious that there are a number of different reasons threaten all natural ecosystems, and therefore it is necessary that there are measures relatively. For example, nylon bags could be replaced by paper bags or duffle bags, interior design products made from second-hand commodities. Such recycling and changing consuming habits enable people to reduce the toxic waste into the environment. Not only the government should introduce restrictions on household refuse as well as industrial waste in order to achieve sustainable development, but also all inhabitants have to be aware of protection environment.
In conclusion, however the increase the cost of fuel brings some advantages to alleviate environmental problems, the combination of various remedies is much more essential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.372 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89420109875 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.644972323 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.090909091 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0909090909 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182871543547 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699981067522 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669110906948 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121349958109 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717739087163 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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