Big salary is the most important thing in job satisfaction
Do you agree or disagree?
It is certain that money has been a one of the crucial thing, diverting onto people’s simple requirements in particularly modern world. In additional, in order to extract money, people are choosing big amount of salary rather than job satisfaction. In terms of job gratification, I completely disagree with the following statement that big amount of salary is the most crucial than job satisfaction.
Firstly, I cannot say that work satisfaction is not depending on big salary that allow them to buy what they want. However, not only the great wage but also other crucial things have been playing a significant role in job satisfaction. Among these, there are two crucial things are responsible for their concern fulfillment. First thing is that if people able to prove subsistence to family, they would concern about another such things as what they are interested to do more and hospitable atmosphere so on. For example, my aunt is working an even small bank as engineering, which contribute his company important duty, quite pleasured by himself. In the result, however she is extracting less money, her job is appreciated by herself.
Secondly, according to the two crucial things, he or she would require such a good surrounding that can pay tribute and praise him in well manner as long as the employ worked hardly for their company. Let’s take my father as example, he is working in factory of Erdenet, known as the one of the big factory as bulldozer driver. However his work is indescribable hard because of lot of hour, sipping my father energy gradually, He is quite keen at his job because his boss appreciate and the workers respect him for resistant personality. In this way, people can approve their labor gratification and would enjoy the concern.
In conclusion, however big amount of salary is responsible for job gratification in extensive manner, there have been existing people who value other things rather than just a money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 46, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ly, I cannot say that work satisfaction is not depending on big salary that allow them to buy wh...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'worked'.
Suggestion: hardly worked
...im in well manner as long as the employ worked hardly for their company. Let's take my f...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...of the big factory as bulldozer driver. However his work is indescribable hard because ...
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Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
...who value other things rather than just a money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04615384615 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88706562603 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575384615385 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0171519349 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222082016072 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791382750961 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754774312881 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150022552781 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794618656959 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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