Immigration has the major impact on the society
What are the main reasons of immigration?
To what consequences it can lead?
In this contemporary time, people have been immigrating another developed country. In terms of immigration, there are plenty of causes that induce people to do it, as well as both positive and negative ending have been waiting us. In this essay, I will explore some of the significant reasons, contribute and there will be a logical conclusion.
Firstly, it have become certain that plenty of reasons, particularly food and dangerous situations are playing significant role for moving to different nation. These are severe issues because all of the 2 aspects have associated with human life. For former context, it is undeniable true that food is one of the fundamental need for people to live. Therefore, people, who are lacking from nutritious, have been immigrating other countries, in order to prove their subsistence. For example, food is being foraged by Africans, leading them to change region. As result, receiving countries are fulling by those, who are impoverished.
Secondly, there is no doubt that humans life is one of the most crucial thing. For this aspect, Soldiers are battling in Siri, coercing people to change the own nation. In addition, it is humane to receive those people, disadvantaged. However, there are plethora of drawbacks that trouble country, regarded as receiver. Let’s take American as example, terrorists accessed with immigrating people, moreover killed considerable amount of people. As result, lot of children stayed without parents.
In conclusion, regardless some of the bad consequences, leading country onto serious circumstance, arriving disadvantaged people in our country is most appreciable thing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5137254902 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97526907471 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.013726549 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0688476583802 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0208036010254 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336394854393 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0406477505608 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00565521331133 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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