Big salary is much more important than a job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
High wage is more beneficial than of a satisfactory job.
Based on some regional grounds,I fully disagree With this statement because job satisfaction is more important than money.
Firstly, if you are doing unsatisfactory job then you will face some problems in your life,Like you will be not feeling well mentally and also physically in your personal life because if you are not satisfied with your job. you may be Get tensed And your relation with your spouse might not go smoothly and the same thing will be happens in your workplace and maybe you fight with your colleague on work issue like you are not doing your work on time.
Furthermore your relationship will be collapse with your friends and family member because of work anxiety.
On the other hand, you will also face some issue in your future If You are doing unhappy job.
However, when you are doing your favourite job in which you are interested then you will be more productive and punctual and you are boss will be happy and your relationship with your co-worker will be fine. furthermore,You can plan for your future goals.
for example,Elon musk is passionate about his work and in his one interview he told that he spends everyday almost 16 hours in his workplace and he do planning for more achievement and success.
However, if someone is not interested in his work then it is near to impossible to do work and to achieve something in life.
To conclude, if you are doing unsatisfactory job then definitely you will face problems in workplace and personal life and it will be difficult to achieve something in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80144404332 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.684085783 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458483754513 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1008244446 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.909090909 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23406558922 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120629783056 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799369269807 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129355998323 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827691859778 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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