Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays purchasing books, buying air tickets and daily essentials are made possible using internet connectivity. For many families especially for working parents the time to go out and buy essentials is becoming very less because of their tight schedule. However there are both pros and cons in online purchase. In this essay i will discuss some of the reasons why online purchase is growing popularity and some of the challenges to be overcome.
Lets begin by looking at the advantages of online purchase, One of the main advantage is it saves an ample amount of time and all items are available in one go. Secondly there will be no crowds since items are shipped in package it ensures privacy and enables your convenience also more variety of products available.
In addition the items will be delivered to their doorstep, also there are options to return products within grace period and to exchange products at better price also few offers good buyback insurance policy. People need to travel long distance to buy bus and flight tickets which can be avoided and they can utilize their time efficiently. For Example Amazon helps to buy Bus tickets, online recharge, flight tickets, Electricity bill payment, Groceries, send money to friends & families and other products so on.
Turning to the other side of the argument, this often leads to window shopping addiction and frequently visiting applications without any proper purpose. Sometimes it often leads to buy products which are unnecessary. Lot of push up notifications and spam mails will flow into mail box. Due to the increase bandwidth conditions environmental surroundings are highly accepted. This high internet usage emits powerful radiations which are harmful to health.
Another issue is that it can be difficult for road side retail stores thus affects their business vastly. This will reduce your chances of contact with local community and sometimes the products received will be fake. Since the trend is newer older people are not used to it and its light difficult for them to use.
All things considered, In the growing technology and busy life it is very difficult to step out and purchase our necessary goods, and the cons of fraudulent products and shipping problems, delays. Personally i believe the benefits in terms of buying products on internet eventually outweigh any negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17402597403 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65231839724 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7007885257 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.842105263 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2631578947 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177980750466 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480927298053 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383189378357 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820096673807 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292346409125 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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