Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Use of internet is becoming more and more popular day by day, people who prefer to buy online products such as groceries, air tickets, clothing and others are fully depend on internet. With the use of this new technology people can get the services on door, but every technology has its pros and cons. In my opinion the online shopping is has both advantages and dis-advantages.
First, many offers are provided by the companies in different categories like clothing, groceries, travelling and other due to which peoples can by product and services in cheaper rate than the shop keepers. some websites also launch online games and other activities for their prime customers in which they can get extra benefits. Second, peoples get free delivery of product at their home address, so it also help them to avoid full day shopping, queue at the payment counter and other.
Major advert effects of online shopping are faced by the small vendors due to online shopping and offers the sale of local vendors are decreased and they phase a big loss in their yearly income as they are fully depend on their small business. other problems are with the quality, and size of the product, some times people do not get the quality product and the feel like they paid a more the product cost and for changing and other option they has to phase a lot of problem. Apart from all these social networks become weaker by online shopping, as people purchase all the thing online so they are not familiar or having a good relation with the vendors and in locality.
In conclusion, online shopping is good but upto a certain extent. buying products online effects the small vendors family who are solely depends on their shops. people become more lazy by this online door services and this reduce their physical activity. some times people suffers from online fraud and transaction by doing online shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... tickets, clothing and others are fully depend on internet. With the use of this new t...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... in cheaper rate than the shop keepers. some websites also launch online games and o...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...oduct at their home address, so it also help them to avoid full day shopping, queue ...
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Line 9, column 213, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...n their yearly income as they are fully depend on their small business. other problems...
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Line 9, column 245, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
...e fully depend on their small business. other problems are with the quality, and size...
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Line 9, column 447, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... and for changing and other option they has to phase a lot of problem. Apart from a...
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Line 9, column 460, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...ging and other option they has to phase a lot of problem. Apart from all these social networks b...
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Line 13, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Buying
...ping is good but upto a certain extent. buying products online effects the small vendo...
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Line 13, column 108, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'vendors'' or 'vendor's'?
Suggestion: vendors'; vendor's
...uying products online effects the small vendors family who are solely depends on their ...
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Line 13, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... who are solely depends on their shops. people become more lazy by this online door se...
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Line 13, column 256, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...nd this reduce their physical activity. some times people suffers from online fraud ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86419753086 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33738788103 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8268705338 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171830803715 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06960181311 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853119409075 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125710097709 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966322111073 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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