The car is possibly the most convenient and popular way of getting from A to B. However, due to its impact on the environment and the risk it poses to pedestrians and motorists, goverments should take urgent steps to reduce our dependency on this mode of transport.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays ordinary life requires quick types of transportation because a lot of people have busy schedules as well as an enormous quantity of different tasks and to satisfy their needs companies, who are in charge of transport, have created various vehicles. It is a well-known fact that the car is probably the most suitable way to get to your destination but there are known to be some affirmative factors that negatively influence nature and pedestrians are imperilled by car movements. Some people think that is absolutely necessary for the government to inject some restrictions to decrease car density. So, I partly agree with the statement that some limits of car usage will alter the current situation.
On the one hand, there is an explicit speculation that usage of cars has created and aggravated world level issues as well as thousands of people are under critical danger every day. It is unquestionably obvious that the most common type of cars is one which engulf petrol to ensure the movement but during the gasoline combustion process a large number of toxic and poisonous substances is allocated by the engine. For example, the contamination of nature leads to serious world problems such as global warming, infant maladies ,and devastation of the atmosphere. In addition to this, cars might generate not only dubious air condition but also be a cause of physical injuries due to the malfunction of some essential parts of the car and negligence of a driver.
On the other hand, currently with the quick development of modern technologies there are some excellent options that producers may provide to people in order to increase the demand for automobiles.Contemporary cars are sometimes manufactured with machine intelligence which allows to avoid all road accidents and release drives from commitments such as being totally focused and concentrated during driving. In addition to this, governments of different countries invest in companies which are specialized on creation of nature friendly transport using various types of energy to guarantee engine work.
In conclusion, after all arguments have been discussed in detail, I believe it is necessary to find the right balance between usage of cars and care of environment and people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, after all, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15977961433 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99729581873 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573002754821 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 363.0 20.2975951904 1788% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1873.0 106.682146367 1756% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 363.0 20.7667163134 1748% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 120.0 7.06120827912 1699% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101344922746 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101344922746 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593360205178 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018906986656 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 184.4 13.0946893788 1408% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -305.43 50.2224549098 -608% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 146.0 11.3001002004 1292% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.13 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.56 8.58950901804 309% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 147.2 10.1190380762 1455% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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