Caring for children is important in any society. All parents should be required to take childcare courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It is recommended that parents should be allowed to enroll in childcare courses since taking care of children plays a vital roll in any society. Personally, I am not convinced of this view for the reasons as follows.
First and foremost, instead of paying attention to childcare courses, parents should focus on their careers. It is apparent that the more efforts spent on work, the more money parents can earn which is used to provide better for their children. For instance, had it not been for a high level of income, parents would have been unable to purschase high-quality indispensable items for infants such as imported milk or pay tuition fees in reputable childcare centers. Consequently, children who received the well-rounded care from an early age have a tendency to get better stamina as well as stand better opportunities to success in the future.
Secondly, it is unnecessary for the participation in childcare classes since parents can learn rising-children experiences from their mothers and the Internet. Indeed, mothers are the ones who have raised us and even our siblings, therefore they find it easy to face common problems such as illness or anoxeria of infants. Moreover, with the support from cutting-edge media, parents are able to get access to a wide variety of childcare knowledge on websites and exchange their children's problems on online forums which give them instant replies from other parents.
All in all, there is no need for parents to spend their money and efforts on childcare courses since the knowledge is easy to be acquired from their own mothers and the Internet. Moreover, it is suggested that rather than wasting time on such course, parents should contribute to their careers in order to earn a higher level of income benefitting their children's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76719748117 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565656565657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0104192296 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.454545455 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27261767151 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108129371971 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828308964599 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180980449595 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717660250811 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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