In some countries, parents expect their children to spend long time studying both in and after school and have less free time. What are the possitive and negative effects on children and society they live in
In some nations, parents have a tendency to put pressure on their children which force them to spend excessive hours on studying and to ignore leisure activities. This trend exerts both beneficial and damaging effects childrenas well as the whole society.
On the one hand, the focus on education benefits for young generations as well as community they live in. It is obvious that the more time spent on acquiring new knowledge, the higher results students can obtain. Consequently, such excellent academic acheivements will help children stand a good opportunity to get promising career prospects since well-known corporations are likely to prioritize applicants with outstanding perfomaces at shool. As a result,without unemployment, the government would have saved a huge number of national budget for investments in public infrastructures or social farewell.
On the other hand, this trend potentially does harm to the well-rounded development of children, resulting in adverse consequences on society. To be specific, since most of time is occupied by studying, children are likely to find it hard to participate in physical activities, which poses threats to their health. Moreover, overload of excercises put high pressures on children, leading to stress or mental illness such as autism. Those problems of children have domino effects on the development of their society. For instance, the low demand of entertainment causes damages to playing centers, toy stores or cinema complexes, putting those businesses on the verge of bankruptcy. What is more, there will be a lack of health centers due to the increasing number of children who facing mental problems resulted from excessive workload.
All in all, study and life should be focused equally in order to ensure the well-rounded developments of children. It is recommended that students should devote time to beneficial activities such as sports which help them not only relax after stressful studying hours but also enhance physical fitness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , without
...tanding perfomaces at shool. As a result,without unemployment, the government would have...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49196141479 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05188230235 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630225080386 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0614960952 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242613810826 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781453737585 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05661466614 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144095339262 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468906137752 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.