The chart below show population statistic in two countries of the UK from 1700 to 2000
The aforementioned bar charts illustrate changes in the population statistic in two countries in the UK namely England and Wales over a 300 years period starting 1700.
Looking at these charts, it is noticeable that although the population was lowest in 1700 but the birth rate and death rate were the second place in the chart. Meanwhile, an opposite pattern was true for that in 2000.
To begin with the population statistic, as can be seen that this amount had an upward trend with a mere 5 million people existed in UK in 1700, followed by a growth dramatically at just over 25 million people in 1900 before reaching a peak of 400 million people in 2000.
Turning to birth rate and death rate. The percentage of residents who were given a birth account for 30 percent among 1000 people in 1700. Ever having a rank first in 1800 with more than 35 percent, the last year surveyed witnessed a significant drop of this percentage at 25 percent, be equivalent to that in 1900. A similar pattern was shown in the prpotion of death
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| 2019-11-11 | Trang Carina | 56 | view |
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- Given high unemployment rate, it is recommended that the government only provide primary education and no secondary education. What do you think? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64130434783 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58016554766 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8561119749 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204169692239 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796774765057 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10229694701 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142652186953 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113543671067 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.