Children are too dependent on computers, electronics and entertainment. It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors.
Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
In the modern era, advanced technology plays a vital role in every person's life. Twenty century children can play with electronic gadgets as well as with traditional pastimes, but dependency on modern styles is not beneficial for their health. In my opinion, old generation ways have more edge on the new paths, but both have their own advantages and disadvantages.
Ancestral techniques give them skills like social life, activeness, health and co-operation. Firstly, when a youngster takes part in outdoor games, it gives him new friends and fresh air, which help him to build his social life ...
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No. of Words: 249 350
Minimum 250 words wanted.
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 249 350
No. of Characters: 1277 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.976 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.108 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.614 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.226 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.538 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.092 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5